Great illustration. As a former AD&D nerd and dungeonmaster, I really liked it. Especially the looks on the slaves faces- I see fear and anger. The Dwarf needs to look more interesting--he looks bored. And while the bondage looks great - chains and collars - all of the slaves should be gagged. A dwarf would never put up with elves complaining--especially dark elves, would be spewing obscenities at the dwarf if not gagged. I hope this helps.